We are now really ambivalent about private cars because they, despite contributing greatly to our life, are also the root causes for chains of aftermaths: intensification of congestion, worsening air quality, and even the decrease of public physique. Being afraid that the situation will go further, we are now putting public transportation again in our sights. However, because of some subtle reasons, instancing vanity or self-esteem, some of us turn their backs to accepting short-distance buses or interstate coaches. Thus, several approaches should be adopted to encourage them.
I go traveling with myt friends. When the new term comes, I will surprisingly find my oral English is much improved. So I firmly believe book is not only the source of knowledge.
为什么这个句子读起来感觉很奇怪？因为句子之间没有逻辑关系：”go traveling ” 与后面的”my oral English is much improved” 并没有必然联系，逻辑上讲不通。
1. Thus, several approaches should be adopted to encourage them.
2. The re-organization of bus routes and improvement of infrastructure should come first.
3. Another strategy for stirring the public to use public transportation should be related to governmental propaganda and some special services should also be provided aboard.
4. In conclusion, the popularity of public transportation can only be fulfilled by the government and public.
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now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in fact, actually
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,
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for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,
in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion
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